Ending rewrite

Composition format

"The cars all seem so small from the 5th storey"Phillip thought as he stood on the ledge. The strong wind blowing rustled his hair as he glanced down the building, thinking of ending it all. All the lies he said and the actions he did ran in his mind as his body began to sway. He closed his eyes and let his momentum carry him down. The last thing he heard was a shriek "NO!" before he took the plunge. Phillip woke in a bright white room, for a moment thinking he was in heaven.
The sight of his parents and friends crowding around him woke him from his trance.

Everyone upon realising he was awake, began bombarding him with questions but he was only focused on one thing: Who saved him from death? As if reading his thoughts, Mrs Malloy spoke: "It was a good thing Miss Narwin saved you or else you would......"Hearing Miss Narwin, Phillip's lies and crimes began replaying in his mind as he glanced towards the window, watching Miss Narwin standing there alone. Looking at isolated Miss Narwin, Phillip felt immensly guilty and remorseful. Then without a warning, Phillip knealt down in front of Miss Narwin and kept on repeating "i am sorry". Everyone was shocked beyond words as Phillip than started kowtowing
to her. Finally everything ended when Phillip fainted, lacking the stamina to continue. Everyone immediately rushed to the doctor after recovering from the shock. Only Miss Narwin remained, her face solemn but in her heart she knew she had already forgiven Phillip.

Newspaper format

Hi, I am Gerald Fam from rainbow stations and breaking news had just reached us. As everyone knows, the Harrison School incident has stirred up much trouble but did you know that Phillip was actually lying? This fact has been clarified and comfirmed leaving citizens both angry and confused. "It had reached a point where nothing else could solve this" so says Phillip when he was interviewed.

Phillip Malloy, student of Harrison school was rejected by his dream CCA, track when his English teacher, Miss Narwin failed him in his English test. This caused Phillip to detest his teacher and tried to get her in trouble by lying. When interviewed, Miss Narwin stated :"I dont hate Phillip, I only want to know why he hates me."

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Blog Prompt

Ladies and Gentlemen,
Today i am going to give a speech on why animals should not be hunted for their body parts as medicinal ingredients. Firstly, people believe animal parts can cure them of some illness but do you know that animal parts have absolutely no medicinal value?In fact, people who eat rhino's horns are in fact eating compressed hair.Secondly, animals are also living things.We cannot just kill them for their medicinal parts as they also have feelings.Thank You for your time and i hope you would refrain from buying body parts of animals so as to discourage this the dealers.

Blog Prompt

I am here to represent my group,Learners for Life,as a representative. We have invented a device which we would like to name the L.I.V.E, an acronym for Latest, Intergrated and Virtual Electronic device.This device can create a virtual enviroment which can allow students to learn at home.By placing this device on yheir heads, students would be able to enter a virtual world and be able to see and hear everything the teacher teaches from home!

A few extra features of this device are it is voice activated and doubles up as a dictionary, computer, textbook and workbook!In this way, students can immediately search for words which they dont know and reduce the level of stress put on their hands. This device can also be supervised by parents when their working by just accessing our website and typing in your L.I.V.E.'s code.I hope this device can be approved by MOE as it benefits students greatly.Thank You for your time.