Ending rewrite

Composition format

"The cars all seem so small from the 5th storey"Phillip thought as he stood on the ledge. The strong wind blowing rustled his hair as he glanced down the building, thinking of ending it all. All the lies he said and the actions he did ran in his mind as his body began to sway. He closed his eyes and let his momentum carry him down. The last thing he heard was a shriek "NO!" before he took the plunge. Phillip woke in a bright white room, for a moment thinking he was in heaven.
The sight of his parents and friends crowding around him woke him from his trance.

Everyone upon realising he was awake, began bombarding him with questions but he was only focused on one thing: Who saved him from death? As if reading his thoughts, Mrs Malloy spoke: "It was a good thing Miss Narwin saved you or else you would......"Hearing Miss Narwin, Phillip's lies and crimes began replaying in his mind as he glanced towards the window, watching Miss Narwin standing there alone. Looking at isolated Miss Narwin, Phillip felt immensly guilty and remorseful. Then without a warning, Phillip knealt down in front of Miss Narwin and kept on repeating "i am sorry". Everyone was shocked beyond words as Phillip than started kowtowing
to her. Finally everything ended when Phillip fainted, lacking the stamina to continue. Everyone immediately rushed to the doctor after recovering from the shock. Only Miss Narwin remained, her face solemn but in her heart she knew she had already forgiven Phillip.

Newspaper format

Hi, I am Gerald Fam from rainbow stations and breaking news had just reached us. As everyone knows, the Harrison School incident has stirred up much trouble but did you know that Phillip was actually lying? This fact has been clarified and comfirmed leaving citizens both angry and confused. "It had reached a point where nothing else could solve this" so says Phillip when he was interviewed.

Phillip Malloy, student of Harrison school was rejected by his dream CCA, track when his English teacher, Miss Narwin failed him in his English test. This caused Phillip to detest his teacher and tried to get her in trouble by lying. When interviewed, Miss Narwin stated :"I dont hate Phillip, I only want to know why he hates me."